week9. refutation and conssesion

1. What is my thesis?
Healthy human mind is the most essential factor to be a true leaders.

2. What is the opposite position?
There can be other factors that can be more important than mental health. 
(such as ability)




Everyone has different ideas. Therefore some people might say ability is more important than the healthy mind. I agree that the ability is one of the traits the leader should have, but healthy mind is more essential. There are so many people who are experts in their fields. This means that there are are a lot of people who have ability. The reason why some of the experts become a leader while others can't depends on the mental health. Think of a Adolf Hitler who was a founder and a leader of the Nazi party. Think about his ability shown in bbc.co.uk/history.  He was very professional on the decision making and fluent on speaking. Also, he was good at grasping the mass crowd. However, no one says he was a good leader. He was the moving spirit of the Nazism and killed the Jews in a very cruel way. Millions of others whom the Nazis considered racially inferior were also killed or worked to death. He thought that only the German people with no physical problems could be treated as a human. He is remembered as excessive nationalist who destroyed the world peace. Just having the ability is not enough to become a good leader.